tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8927785.post4151607460727421437..comments2023-09-17T04:20:48.417-07:00Comments on Jaye Albright's Breakfast Blog: Hey, News Writers: Make The TurnAlbright and O'Malleyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13933457732458275539noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8927785.post-30886664982715344792012-07-17T07:46:39.675-07:002012-07-17T07:46:39.675-07:00I've been dealing with this issue for a while....I've been dealing with this issue for a while. <br /><br />Came up with a writing style I've called "Effect/Cause" that I share with our news teams. <br /><br />Basically reversed the usual "cause and effect" relationship and puts the effect on the listener first, in one sentence. Then the cause... also one sentence. Then the next story... rinse and repeat.Steve Joneshttp://www.facebook.com/steveajonesnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8927785.post-765675449624813342012-07-16T16:14:32.132-07:002012-07-16T16:14:32.132-07:00You should do a contest to see who can write the s...You should do a contest to see who can write the shortest headline and still keep the gist of the story. For example, I'm sure there's someone who can write it shorter than I did: "Man dead in car wreck." <br /><br />The winner gets a case of notoriety.Buzz Jacksonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06408708502925011938noreply@blogger.com